Hey everyone! Shine here. I’ve just written a short story. I will be editing, and adding more. Please, give me honest comments. I don’t care if it’s negative, nor positive, but I’d like to know what you’d like me to add on to this story. Hope you like it!
The Story of Devil and Angel
This is the story of a beautiful, wonderful Angel and an evil, vicious, ruthless Devil.
Although, they weren’t always Angels and Devils. They used to be mortals. Simple mortals with no power. Here is the story of how it all began. Starting from their early years.This is Aiko. She is a beautiful, friendly, loving, girl who has the cutest crush on a boy named Akihiro. With beautiful golden-brown hair, she has the cutest smile along with her soft, blue and elegant eyes.
This is Akihiro. He has a dark brown, and short haircut with a beautiful smile that could brighten anyone’s day. And though he has gray eyes, you can look deep inside of them, and see kindness. He is a scholar who has a meaningful, lovely crush on Aiko. Aiko and Akihiro don’t know that they will soon be together. And their love for each other shall burn forever, and never stop.
This is Kuro. She has burning, furious red eyes, and yet, has a smile on her face. Kuro may seem like a beautiful, fun-loving, girl, but you’re wrong. She feels anger, death, and deep inside of her, evil. Why is she like this? Continue the story to find out. She has a menacing crush with a boy named Kurai.
This is Kurai. He has a dark gray hair color with a black bandana around it. Like Kuro, he has red eyes that glow like a lantern. He has a desperate, yet burning love for Kuro. They love each other, and they both know it.
Kurai even said “Hajimete ata tokikara sukidata” to Kuro. And Kuro replied with “Kokoro no sokokara aishiteru.” Kurai and Kuro grew up together in their teenage years. They had a burning love that could make anyone burst out with a smile. They even created a diabolical plan to become devils. While Aiko and Akihiro wanted to become angels together.
Thanks to Happy, I got the picture on! Thanks for the support, and comments. I will finish the story too. Also, make sure you enter the new contest! 😉